Another excellent story, I loved it! As another reader also pointed out, I too like that fact that it was long. Stories that are really good always end too soon. Even with 12 chapters I still find myself longing for more. I am glad I hunted this down on Live journal, now I don't have to wait for updates. Of course that also means I have nothing good to read for a while either. It's been dreadfully slow and dull on FFN lately with the Roy and Riza fics.

Once more, excellent story. Loved it. Looking forward to your next one. :)