Okay, let me start by how the first and last lines of dialogue broke my heart. It's so believable that even after a lifetime with Edward and one without him, Al's first instinct would be to reach out to his brother.

then I really like the part where the Elrics and the Mustangs come together, oh, to be a fly on that wall.

And Edwina? Sweet. I really liked the detail of him already thinking to write children's story for her.

lovedit!