ext_15134 (
evil-little-dog.livejournal.com
) wrote
in
cornerofmadness
2009-02-24 04:20 am (UTC)
no subject
Very...scary, that last bit.
Edits!
Roy heard Ed yelp, his arm erupting in sparks as a bullet tore into it A raw scream tore out of the Edward’s throat as Alphonse hit ground,
(period after "into it")
(Alphonse hit "the" ground)
If they survive this, Winry and Riza will kill them ALL.
(
34 comments
)
Post a comment in response:
From:
Anonymous
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
OpenID
Identity URL:
Log in?
Dreamwidth account
Account name
Password
Log in?
If you don't have an account you can
create one now
.
Subject
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
Formatting type
Casual HTML
Markdown
Raw HTML
Rich Text Editor
Message
[
Home
|
Post Entry
|
Log in
|
Search
|
Browse Options
|
Site Map
]
no subject
Edits! Roy heard Ed yelp, his arm erupting in sparks as a bullet tore into it A raw scream tore out of the Edward’s throat as Alphonse hit ground,
(period after "into it")
(Alphonse hit "the" ground)
If they survive this, Winry and Riza will kill them ALL.