For those who are curious

[cornerofmadness]

Here's the second chapter of my Post -Not Fade Away story, Built on Lies (Construito su bugie) 

Since this is so different from my usual, input is a good thing. I tried to keep Kennedy to her self-admitted brat mode and Andrew to how he was portrayed in Damage which to me is even more pompous than Wes' origin appearance (yeah so bascially, this isn't very pro-these characters but you were probably guessing that)

Still, that's the minor stuff. I'm more interested in the two point of view characters and their interactions, that and if I'm doing a good job describing Rome without over doing it.

Comments

[a2zmom.livejournal.com]

Me likes. I don't think it's too much description of Rome, but then again, I find that kind of thing interesting. A little too much telling with regard to Kennedy instead of showing, I think. As I said in the past, I can't believe Andrew showing any sexual interest in any woman, ever! I'm assuming the shit's going to hit the fan when Buffy finds out Connor's parentage because eeww.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks for the input. Yeah you're probably right about Kennedy.

You know, personally I think Andrew is gay BUT they did have him interested in women occasionally so...he's more of a busybody here than anything. (Did he ever show an interest in Dawn? I thought he might have been I stopped watching by then)

Yeah actually the shit hitting is story #2.

[dlgood.livejournal.com]

I think Andrew is unconfirmed - an Ambiguously Gay fanboy.

I don't know if he showed an interest in Dawn. He may have, but I was too busy not caring about him to notice... I could see Dawn treating him as Cordy treated Jonathan in High School though..

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

That's my take on it too. Didn't pay any attention for the same reason.

[emmyaward.livejournal.com]

Ooh, yay, Rome story. I'm enjoying this one, and I'm squeeing, because Buffy/Connor is like my 'guilty secret' ship. It's extremely weird, and also kind of gross, and I can't figure out why I like it, but I do. I can see though, that the shit is going to hit the fan in a major way when Buffy finds out who his parents are.

Loved the Legolas reference. *g*

I'm looking forward to more of this; I really want to see where you're going with it.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

Thanks. You now I've only ever read one Buffy/Connor since it's not my ship by Princess Twilite which was excellent but she dropped out before it was done sadly (or at least I don't think it was ever finished). THen I think it was Penguins who mentioned it in my Connor ficathon and I said you know, it really could be interesting. It's twisted enough to interest me.

Yeah well, BUffy's a living breathing girl so I'm sure she isn't blind to the adorableness of Legalos or oh let's say for argument's sake, Hugh Jackman. :-)

This is planned to be a series or at lesat a two story arc btw

[esmerelda-t.livejournal.com]

Andrew never showed a sexual interest in Dawn IMO, it was more, its hard to describe, cause I think he did like her, just not in that way, I suppose it was more a "arent you the cutest thing" interest, like you would with someone's kid, or pet.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

thanks for the input.

I'm still trying to wrap my head around about the two women in rome. Not that I've seen it. I'm pretty much boycotting that episode in general.