For those who are curious

[cornerofmadness]

Here's the second chapter of my Post -Not Fade Away story, Built on Lies (Construito su bugie) 

Since this is so different from my usual, input is a good thing. I tried to keep Kennedy to her self-admitted brat mode and Andrew to how he was portrayed in Damage which to me is even more pompous than Wes' origin appearance (yeah so bascially, this isn't very pro-these characters but you were probably guessing that)

Still, that's the minor stuff. I'm more interested in the two point of view characters and their interactions, that and if I'm doing a good job describing Rome without over doing it.

Comments

[a2zmom.livejournal.com]

Me likes. I don't think it's too much description of Rome, but then again, I find that kind of thing interesting. A little too much telling with regard to Kennedy instead of showing, I think. As I said in the past, I can't believe Andrew showing any sexual interest in any woman, ever! I'm assuming the shit's going to hit the fan when Buffy finds out Connor's parentage because eeww.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks for the input. Yeah you're probably right about Kennedy.

You know, personally I think Andrew is gay BUT they did have him interested in women occasionally so...he's more of a busybody here than anything. (Did he ever show an interest in Dawn? I thought he might have been I stopped watching by then)

Yeah actually the shit hitting is story #2.

[dlgood.livejournal.com]

I think Andrew is unconfirmed - an Ambiguously Gay fanboy.

I don't know if he showed an interest in Dawn. He may have, but I was too busy not caring about him to notice... I could see Dawn treating him as Cordy treated Jonathan in High School though..

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

That's my take on it too. Didn't pay any attention for the same reason.