For those who are curious

[cornerofmadness]

Here's the second chapter of my Post -Not Fade Away story, Built on Lies (Construito su bugie) 

Since this is so different from my usual, input is a good thing. I tried to keep Kennedy to her self-admitted brat mode and Andrew to how he was portrayed in Damage which to me is even more pompous than Wes' origin appearance (yeah so bascially, this isn't very pro-these characters but you were probably guessing that)

Still, that's the minor stuff. I'm more interested in the two point of view characters and their interactions, that and if I'm doing a good job describing Rome without over doing it.

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[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

That's my take on it too. Didn't pay any attention for the same reason.