Writerly Ways
Jun. 1st, 2025 08:50 pmInspiration can hit mid chapter. In my author's zoom meetings you often hear 'my scene took an unexpected twist' which probably sounds bizarre to non-authors. How does a scene go somewhere you didn't imagine? Well I'm here to tell you it does, even for plotters (which two of our number are and it was the plotter and the pantser (me) who had this happen this week).
Maybe it has to do with 'being in the zone' or whatever you like to call it. Authors will know what I mean. Time falls away. The only thing you're aware of it words spilling onto the page and suddenly there it is, something you hadn't thought of until that moment and a lot of times it's just what your story needed (sometimes it isn't but I find writing it out, getting it out of my head, kills that side bar and I can slice it out later.
This week on the fly I decided 'yeah the fantasy-mystery thing isn't flowing, let's try something new.' Another thing in these zoom meetings is at least 3 of us have gotten agents and the publishers are already demanding book 2 before book 1 is even fully edited. So I thought to myself, you're fixing up book 1 now. Maybe you should start book 2 NOW in case you find yourself in this position and you're not stuck crapping out book 2 in a rush (I do wonder if that's half the reason for 'the sophomore blues' in so many book 2s)
Book 2 starts out much darker than I intended (but that's a post for another time) and I have Grace being really rattled. That's when it occurs to me that unlike her three partners in the monster hunting biz, Grace wasn't born into the organization like the others. She's an outsider recruited into it. And a side quest is born. Grace doubting if she's where she belongs can be a decent subplot and give her something more to do (I struggled with her in book one) Sometimes inspiration just goes that way, coming out of nowhere.
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Maybe it has to do with 'being in the zone' or whatever you like to call it. Authors will know what I mean. Time falls away. The only thing you're aware of it words spilling onto the page and suddenly there it is, something you hadn't thought of until that moment and a lot of times it's just what your story needed (sometimes it isn't but I find writing it out, getting it out of my head, kills that side bar and I can slice it out later.
This week on the fly I decided 'yeah the fantasy-mystery thing isn't flowing, let's try something new.' Another thing in these zoom meetings is at least 3 of us have gotten agents and the publishers are already demanding book 2 before book 1 is even fully edited. So I thought to myself, you're fixing up book 1 now. Maybe you should start book 2 NOW in case you find yourself in this position and you're not stuck crapping out book 2 in a rush (I do wonder if that's half the reason for 'the sophomore blues' in so many book 2s)
Book 2 starts out much darker than I intended (but that's a post for another time) and I have Grace being really rattled. That's when it occurs to me that unlike her three partners in the monster hunting biz, Grace wasn't born into the organization like the others. She's an outsider recruited into it. And a side quest is born. Grace doubting if she's where she belongs can be a decent subplot and give her something more to do (I struggled with her in book one) Sometimes inspiration just goes that way, coming out of nowhere.
Open Call
SmokeLong – Dark Fantasy and Psychological Thriller Call
More Monsters Next Door
Ruadán Books 2025 Novel and Novella Reading Period
America’s Slide Toward Authoritarianism
Deep Anthology
Kozy Krampus
Encounters With Cryptids closing on this is soon
After Dark, Volume 2 honestly I think they're paying WAY too little for stories this long
14 Magazines Accepting Climate and Environmental Fiction
27 Literary Journals with Fast Response Times
From Around the Web
How to Get Back Into Writing
Case Study: How The Coat Check Girl Came to Life
The Development of a Trope By James L Hill
10 Haunted House Places and Creepy Locations That Will Give You Chills
Writing Subtext for Non-POV Characters
5 Reasons a Literary Agent Isn’t Going to Steal Your Story, Make Millions, and Cut You Out It never occurred to me that people were really afraid of this.
Balanced Writer, Balanced Story
From Betty
Communication is the Key to Critique Partner Success
Refilling Your Creative Well with Artist Dates I liked this one
Seven Common Reasons Protagonists Are Unlikable
Five Ways the Honorverse Builds an Immersive World
Six Common Wordcraft Mistakes in Manuscripts
Five Ways to Add Conflict to Your Story
What Cozy Fantasy Is and How to Write It I still want to do this
Show, Don’t Tell, by Scene Segmenting
7 Types of Questions to Help You Define Your Author Brand I still find this limiting and something I could care less about. If I like an author, I'll read most of what they write. I don't pay much attention to brands
Writing Subtext for Non-POV Characters
Secondary Characters: All the Fun, a Lot Less Work
When The Good Guys Must Die