For those who are curious
Jun. 2nd, 2004 05:14 pmHere's the second chapter of my Post -Not Fade Away story, Built on Lies (Construito su bugie)
Since this is so different from my usual, input is a good thing. I tried to keep Kennedy to her self-admitted brat mode and Andrew to how he was portrayed in Damage which to me is even more pompous than Wes' origin appearance (yeah so bascially, this isn't very pro-these characters but you were probably guessing that)
Still, that's the minor stuff. I'm more interested in the two point of view characters and their interactions, that and if I'm doing a good job describing Rome without over doing it.

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Date: 2004-06-02 11:57 pm (UTC)Loved the Legolas reference. *g*
I'm looking forward to more of this; I really want to see where you're going with it.
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Date: 2004-06-03 06:50 am (UTC)Yeah well, BUffy's a living breathing girl so I'm sure she isn't blind to the adorableness of Legalos or oh let's say for argument's sake, Hugh Jackman. :-)
This is planned to be a series or at lesat a two story arc btw