For those who are curious

[cornerofmadness]

Here's the second chapter of my Post -Not Fade Away story, Built on Lies (Construito su bugie) 

Since this is so different from my usual, input is a good thing. I tried to keep Kennedy to her self-admitted brat mode and Andrew to how he was portrayed in Damage which to me is even more pompous than Wes' origin appearance (yeah so bascially, this isn't very pro-these characters but you were probably guessing that)

Still, that's the minor stuff. I'm more interested in the two point of view characters and their interactions, that and if I'm doing a good job describing Rome without over doing it.

Comments

[esmerelda-t.livejournal.com]

Andrew never showed a sexual interest in Dawn IMO, it was more, its hard to describe, cause I think he did like her, just not in that way, I suppose it was more a "arent you the cutest thing" interest, like you would with someone's kid, or pet.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

thanks for the input.

I'm still trying to wrap my head around about the two women in rome. Not that I've seen it. I'm pretty much boycotting that episode in general.