Yeah, I thought McGee has lost a boatload of weight, myself. His neck was sticking out of his collar like a stick.
That part of Arizona wouldn't be THAT hot this time of year (assuming this is set sort of "now")... *g*
ETA: Oh, and yeah, not the best idea of Gibbs, but he's always had a very, very, VERY tender spot where that whole event has been concerned. What was strange was Leon going along with him... (Not to mention all the forensic evidence, etc.)
And your writing? I love your characters -- your dialogue and character interaction is amazing, and you plot like crazy. Sometimes your prose is a little stilted, but sometimes I'm not sure if that's not just a matter of style, because I find I get used to it when I read your work. No matter, it's always extremely compelling.
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Date: 2010-03-03 01:12 pm (UTC)That part of Arizona wouldn't be THAT hot this time of year (assuming this is set sort of "now")... *g*
ETA: Oh, and yeah, not the best idea of Gibbs, but he's always had a very, very, VERY tender spot where that whole event has been concerned. What was strange was Leon going along with him... (Not to mention all the forensic evidence, etc.)
And your writing? I love your characters -- your dialogue and character interaction is amazing, and you plot like crazy. Sometimes your prose is a little stilted, but sometimes I'm not sure if that's not just a matter of style, because I find I get used to it when I read your work. No matter, it's always extremely compelling.