Love Roy and Al's conversation, very funny and sweet. LOL too bad Roy now is not the time for another stolen afternoon. :P Yay for a lead in, though.
I'm gonna have to agree with Ed that Roy's move on John is cool, haha. I laughed aloud when Hala mentions sex play and Roy blushing. XD And love the final scene, especially the last paragraph. :3
Overall, this has been a fun and great read, enjoyed this very much! Can't wait for the last part of this verse if you ever get the chance to write it (and in the meantime I'll busy myself reading the first two parts, haha). :D
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Date: 2012-03-14 04:41 am (UTC)I'm gonna have to agree with Ed that Roy's move on John is cool, haha. I laughed aloud when Hala mentions sex play and Roy blushing. XD And love the final scene, especially the last paragraph. :3
Overall, this has been a fun and great read, enjoyed this very much! Can't wait for the last part of this verse if you ever get the chance to write it (and in the meantime I'll busy myself reading the first two parts, haha). :D