I'd agree with you on your rules. I'm not big on reading erotica as a whole but when I do, #1 bothers me SO much.
Nice writing exercise. I've been in a class that had us do this before and it's a lot of fun. It really makes a scene that much easier to get into as well.
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Date: 2009-10-04 11:11 pm (UTC)Nice writing exercise. I've been in a class that had us do this before and it's a lot of fun. It really makes a scene that much easier to get into as well.