that sound you just heard was me hitting a wall.

[cornerofmadness]

I've hit a major block in my bigbang. I'm over the required word count. That isn't the trouble. I know the ending. BUT...there is no middle. Part of me says do this or that but the other part says no that's too soon.

Then i remind myself I only have about two weeks. THere is NO SUCH THING as too soon at this point. But i think it will feel rushed if i do that.

argh argh. This is going to need a sounding board I think. whimpers. my usual sounding boards have big bangs of their own to do. whimpers more

things I know need to happen or at least want to happen.

1 - might be nice if Maes did something on his own

2 - The brothers need to do something risky to set Roy off

3- Roy loses his control

4 - Maes confides one of Roy's secrets to the brothers

5 - villian set #1 has to do something

6 - villian set #2 has to do something

7 - Madam Christmas et al should probably do something

8 - they blow off steam

9 - bad stuff happens to Ed

10 - group sex unaware that something bad is happening to Ed

11 - they try to rescue Ed

12 - Ed tries to rescue himself

Riza/Armstrong/Breda have absolutely NOTHING to do.

oh yeah - been talking about dinner at hte Hughes' i SHOULD do that

Comments

[enemytosleep]

Did Roy convince you to add in the group sex? SOunds like you've got a lot on your plate. Me, I'm stuck in the desert beating RanFan and keeping an eye on Ling.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

roy was adamant about the group hurt/comfort sex since before this started

you've been stuck there a while haven't you

[enemytosleep]

He would be. XD

It was a long journey through the desert. Lots and lots of sand.

[enemytosleep]

Oh, and there are new eggs at the Cave now. 4 of them, though it is rumored the 4th egg is an alt form of one of the water breeds.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

yes yes roy would be

i can believe that

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

oh geez. now i have something ELSE to obsess over

[bob_fish.livejournal.com]

these scenes all sound awesome, but - a lot to get through in two weeks? You could take out the ones which are less necessary, then maybe slot them back in after the first draft if you really like them? Mind you, your writing methods are quite different to mine (and obvs working for you in terms of getting stuff out because you're amazingly prolific)

When my characters have nothing to do and I miss them, sometimes I have them sitting around pissing about as if they're in the green room. You may notice Breda does this a lot in NSI. Next chapter I was thinking of having a scene of Riza (shoulder injury, remember) and Havoc sulking together and being bad at waiting around while half the tachi are off enjoying an action scene.

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Didn't you know if COM's writing him, Roy insists on group sex? He even bothers her to have ME write him having group sex in my stories, and he's quite miffed he may not even make it INTO my Big Bang, at least from what COM tells me.

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

At least your notes are more coherent. Mine are:

Dinner Party

Ed needs to meet Grant

VILLAIN does stuff again

And we all live mopily ever after.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

I'm at that damn dinner party - ROy


Actually WRITING the notes helped. And someone told me something this morning that I'm adding here before i forget.

one villian from the school gets caught first, then Beckert and then the siblings

[havocmangawip.livejournal.com]

This would work! Not to mention try writing each section separately? I sit down with my outlines and write what will pop out at me during each session.

*I am nowhere as prolific as you are, so this might not work for you.

Bob? I like the idea of Havoc and Riza left behind sulking... perhaps running comms... but still sulking.

Breda being left behind on the car chase was epic.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

I actually AM writing a couple scenes separately. I tend NOT to work out of sequence since I have a poor record of it but i'm doing one scene on paper and the other on the computer right now.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

roy's a hedonist

He is SO pissed about your bigbang

your icon is SOOOOOO wrong and so funny

[bob_fish.livejournal.com]

My problem? I write all the fun stuff first. That's a bad habit, I always end up left with the plot expo and it kills me finding fun ways to deliver it.

I am so mean to Breda in that story. He's going to rebel and get his own back at some point. XD

Yes, I was actually imagining them sitting at the radio link up with little thunderclouds over their heads and maybe Fuery all "but aren't you guys having fun? This is fun!"

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Obviously, writing the notes made me think of something that the Villain needed to do that I should be able to wrap up into something, too....

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

I might have to sacrifice something but it would probably HAVE to be the sex scene

hahah poor Breda and yes mine end up pissing and moaning too. That's probably where Breda is. In fact as I fell asleep last night he told me he will NOT be there when Al comes looking for him because he's out on a date (with Roy's sister not that HE knows it)

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Roy trained Al well. *eyebrow*

I'm sure he is. He was expecting a group grope, from what you're telling me.

Isn't it GREAT. I wish the colors didn't change so much from one flash to the other but....

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

cool

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

Ah see i don't do that. Occasionally i MUST write a scene because they won't shut up and concentrate but on the whole i write linearly

poor Fuery

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

THE BODY. THERE IS A BODY.

[bob_fish.livejournal.com]

I might have to sacrifice something but it would probably HAVE to be the sex scene

With enemy as my beta I can safely say that will never happen to me XP. She is on board with the glacial pace at which I am moving the shippy stuff in NSI, which means you get to read the action-packed conclusion without doing a spit-take from unexpected Roy/Ed porn. XD

With Roy's sister? I nearly had a scene with Breda trying to pull Vanessa but being too scared because she was surprise-glomping Roy. Glad he's managed to snag a sister in your fic. I kind of want to set him up with one of the snarky ones to see how he handles it. XD

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

he did

you know Roy wants it

i didn't notice until you told me

[bob_fish.livejournal.com]

At least he's having fun? He's so nice he'll probably bring them coffee and shortbread in a lame attempt to cheer them up.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

haha the sex in my big bang came fast (no pun intended. I think Maes and Roy misunderstood the meaning of big bang)

I would probably like that scenario of yours should it end up that way

I figure Roy has Breda checking something out wiht a sister and things happen. It'll probably be a snarky one. I'm not sure I write any others

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

i can see that

[bob_fish.livejournal.com]

I'm presuming the scenario you'd like is lack of porn rather than porn? Unless I'm totally surprised (unlikely given how I've overplanned this fic), not even kissage until the sequel, so you're in luck.

I wrote Vanessa a little sweeter and dafter (although most of her bits got cut in the end as I had difficulty getting a handle on her) but yeah, otherwise I have snarky sister and snarkier sister. I think if you grow up in that house, you're highly likely to pick up a little snark. XD

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Roy needs to talk to YOU, you're his writer.

I'm more observant than you!

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

about colors yes you are

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

yes i'm happy with no porn since yeah, don't like that pairing but i like this story (i'm working on my writer's group stuff due yesterday so i haven't had a chance to look at ch 6)

yes learning to snark would be handy in that household

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

yeah, not much about anything else. *laugh*

[anat-astarte.livejournal.com]

OMG writing blocks drive me nuts!! As so twenty rewrites, just in the first month...grrr...

There's one fic I have been working on since last year- last year!- and I still can't get it started the way I envision it... *sigh* Oh well, at least I have the idea now, and even that took a year and a day (I kid you not) to come up with!

I'm not part of any challenges, lemme know if you need another pair of eyes on it ok? Good luck!

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

oh i've been working on some longer than that but yes it's frustrating.

sure, if you want to. i could probably send what i have over.