Thank you

[cornerofmadness]

Thanks to everyone who responded to the blurb issue. You helped and I'm very appreciative.

I have another couple of questions on content. One I asked the editor and got their opinion but I'm looking for some other outside opinions (with the understanding that you haven't read this thing).

I did mess up one thing. At one point I mentioned that Siobhan could draw the stranger that Taabu thinks could have had a hand in her attack and I FORGOT about it except one place. So the question becomes do I go back and work in this picture other places or do I go back an erased it entirely. (they're leaning to the former).

One thing it did highlight for me is, my villains are morons so I AM going back and putting them in DISGUISE. That way they can slid past the heroes without being easily noticed. I mean wigs and colored contacts are pretty damn easy to get.


The next thing is what to do about the heroes inability to follow/find the bad guys. THere are FOUR heroes (there had been more but the original rejection told me to lose them) So if you were reading a book that had only 4 people trying to protect Arri's friends and find the bad guys in a city the size of Las Vegas would you find this unbelievable? Would you find it too unbelievable that a werewolf couldn't pick up a scent in a building that has a few dozen people in it daily and then the villain got in the car?

I only have about three more days to fix this so if you have thoughts I would SO appreciate them.