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I, like most authors, want to pack in as much emotion (and emotional trauma) as I can in a story. However sometimes we manage it in inauthentic ways, not on purpose but because we're trying to be clever, deliver that 'big twist' or just don't have a great handle on some things because we're reaching (I mean I have no idea how to be a drug addicted sex worker but writing Angel Dust fan fic (and some of my own characters) I've had to at least try to think like one.

We often reach out and read 'how tos' all over the place (I mean I DO write this post every weekend chock full of links) but at the end of the day not all of them are helpful and many don't look at this in a way that makes sense to everyone. And let's be clear here, we ALL make mistakes and see things in different ways such as you'll see in my examples in a minute.

I just finished one YA horror that was pretty darned good. However, there were some emotional missteps. One could have been fixed with a little editing (the constant emo-ing about losing her friends 3 years ago that takes up every conscious minute) and the other was I think trying to be a twist but felt like at the 3/4s mark the protagonist suddenly wakes up and realizes she's gay. We've all seen things and wondered WHY would ANYONE act like the thing we just saw/read/heard. Sometimes the answer is as simple as we don't understand that psychology that would make it believable and so it wasn't present in the narrative.

To that end I'm sharing Georgia Dow's stuff. She's not a writer but a therapist who loves analyzing characters in fandoms I like (there are other therapists out there too and it's interesting to give them a listen, to learn how people think/react/adapt. I first found here via The Owl House but all of those have disappeared off YT so here are some (one I think I've shared before) others so you can get a taste of it.

Here's one looking at Husk's psychology and how some of us keep people at a distance. (also there is a fair amount of disagreement with one of her statements and I'm rather with them vs her when she takes Husk to task for being a bit harsh to Angel's constant sexual inneundos which are very unwanted)


This one is very spoilery if you are NOT fully caught up with Helluva Boss but it's a good look at a relationship self destructing and what happens when partners are at unequal status (which is a trope a lot of people enjoy)


A good one looking at depression which a lot of characters (and authors and readers) struggle with


And a look at Wednesday and bad therapy


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Date: 2024-08-26 12:17 pm (UTC)
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I feel this so hard! I tried to read a book by an author I liked, but the main characters was a drug addict and I just. Could. Not. Relate. I had to DNF it because I had no connection to him and the way he acted/thought. It was disappointing because I really wanted to enjoy the book.

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