
Never thought of it that way but it's a great way of looking at it.
So how it is going? Day three was all about editing for me. I got my original short in shape enough for the beta reader to look at it.
If I've missed you on the tally let me know.
Day three-
china_shop,
shadaras,
carenejeans,
cornerofmadness,
luzula,
goddess47,
badly_knitted,
sylvanwitch,
cmk418,
nafs,
yasaman,
brithistorian,
trobadora,
ysilme,
Day One -
cornerofmadness,
china_shop,
badly_knitted,
sylvanwitch,
goddess47,
trobadora,
shadaras,
cmk418,
nafs,
sanguinity,
yasaman,
ysilme,
carenejeans,
luzulaDay Two
cornerofmadness,
china_shop,
goddess47,
badly_knitted,
sylvanwitch,
cmk418,
trobadora,
ysilme,
carenejeans,
sanguinity,
yasaman,
shadaras,
luzula,
sylvanwitch,
brithistorian,
carenejeans
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Date: 2025-06-12 03:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2025-06-15 02:52 pm (UTC)And it's something that I totally didn't plan — it just happened. Similarly, when I was about 2/3 of the way through writing volume 1, I noticed that every time the protagonist went through a major life change, it was marked by her eating French onion soup. Not something I had planned up to that point; it just happened. After I noticed that, then I started being conscious of French onion soup.
After having that experience, it gave me more insight into an experience that one of my friends had when we were in high school. My high school was on a university campus, and while I was there the students in AP English got to go to a conference that the university hosted on the writings of Eudora Welty. After coming back from the conference, my friend told me about an incident where a scholar had just finished delivering a paper on the phallic symbolism in one of Welty's stories and then opened the floor to questions. The first question was "Do you thing that Ms Welty intended for this symbolism to be present in the story?", whereupon Eudora Welty, who was in the audience, stood up, snapped "She most certainly did not!", and abruptly sat back down. Having done it myself, I can now see how an author could put symbolism in a story without intending to.
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Date: 2025-06-15 04:49 pm (UTC)I am tickled by your french onion soup issue. I've had things like that happen a time or two