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Dear Commas,
Why of why do you plague me? I know where you go, honest I do. Why will you not appear in the first drafts of any of my stories? My betas are tired of flagging you. Even if I didn't know where you went, I've been flogged to death enough now that you should be automatic. I still miss putting you into a draft even when I put you in red and circle you on the rough. Why do you hate me so? I swear you just disappear after I put you into my story.
And in other news my uncle just won another 13,000$ on the slots. I think I hate him.
Why of why do you plague me? I know where you go, honest I do. Why will you not appear in the first drafts of any of my stories? My betas are tired of flagging you. Even if I didn't know where you went, I've been flogged to death enough now that you should be automatic. I still miss putting you into a draft even when I put you in red and circle you on the rough. Why do you hate me so? I swear you just disappear after I put you into my story.
And in other news my uncle just won another 13,000$ on the slots. I think I hate him.
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Date: 2006-05-04 03:01 pm (UTC)Oh, I've had the hardest time getting through the story. I think it's the freaky tenses in the first paragraph. Though, it could just be me.
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Date: 2006-05-04 03:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-04 03:21 pm (UTC)I was going to say something about the "Case of the Missing Commas".
:o)
And damn! I wish I had that kind of luck. *Shakes Head*, but good for him.
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Date: 2006-05-04 03:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-04 03:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-04 04:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-04 03:46 pm (UTC)...it could happen.
*nod nod*
And omguh I need to go to Vegas again.
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Date: 2006-05-04 04:13 pm (UTC)My uncle is so lucky.
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Date: 2006-05-04 11:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-05 02:21 am (UTC)