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cornerofmadnessTrying to get the one nano idea moving. Part of the problem is its told first person and there is just so much that Al and Lotus could be seeing and doing that Yukio would never know about. I'm currently reading a book where half the chapters are first person and the others third person limited. I've seen several books in this format. I've been considering this format for some time now. I'm beginning to think Yukio's story might benefit from it.
What do you guys think of them? Is that okay by you? Is it confusing? A turn off? Something exciting?
What do you guys think of them? Is that okay by you? Is it confusing? A turn off? Something exciting?
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