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Caught in the Act
Cornerofmadness
Disclaimer - not mine, all characters belong to Hiromu Arakawa et al, Square Enix and funimition. I don’t make a profit
Pairing –Ed/Winry
Rating – PG-13
Time Line – manga based, no real spoilers , future fic
Summary – Winry has to know why he hides his feelings.
Author’s Note - Written for [livejournal.com profile] japan_girl16 for her charitable contribution for [livejournal.com profile] fire_fic. She wanted Ed/Winry with Ed blushing, no angst (I think a tinge of it snuck into the fluff though. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] lyricnonsense and [livejournal.com profile] evil_little_dog for their ideas since I was all out of fluff



Winry didn’t understand him sometimes, well a lot of the times. Occasionally when he started spouting alchemic formulas to hide his feelings, she felt vaguely embarrassed that she loved him. Still, times like this, Winry knew why it was that she loved Edward. The thing that currently puzzled her was why Ed didn’t want anyone to see the kindness he was capable of. He wore armor thicker than the metal Al had been anchored to, hiding all his tender emotions behind it.

The automail mechanic had been watching Ed ever since Al had been brought back, his frail, pale body resting comfortably in the guest bedroom in the Rockbell home while he slowly regained his strength. Ed would never just go to his brother’s room with a snack or a book or whatever he was bringing Al directly. He would glance around to see if anyone was looking then sneak in like a thief in the night as if he would die if someone caught him being anything but an irascible brat. Winry wasn’t sure who he was trying to fool. Was there anyone who didn’t know that he had a fiery devotion to his brother and a deep love for her? Even the Fuhrer had known that much.

She didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to Al’s room, seeing Ed sneak inside but she wasn’t prepared for this. Ed sat on the chair next to Al’s bed and in his hands was a grey ball of fluff. How had he snuck in a kitten? Seeing her in the doorway, Ed dropped the kitten on Al, going redder than his favored cloak.

“Wi…Winry,” he stammered, obviously embarrassed to be caught at indulging his brother’s love of cats.

Winry just backed out of the room, shaking her head. At least the kitten had the good grace not to get scared at its sudden fall. She waited on the steps, knowing Ed would have to come out and explain himself. He wouldn’t be able to help it. Ed didn’t disappoint her. “Dropping a cat like that.” She could barely maintain her stern look.

Ed dropped onto the steps next to her. “It’s a kitten. It weighs nothing.”

“Hardly the point.” Winry smiled at him. “I can’t believe you got Al a kitten.”

“I didn’t!” he blustered. “It came in….” Ed faltered, seeing she wasn’t buying it. “Through the window?”

Winry snorted. “So that was going to be your cover story? Why would you not want us to know you did something so sweet for your brother? Al has been dying for a cat since he was a little boy.”

Ed shrugged. “I don’t know…I…I’m so used to trying to protect you all. If the enemy thought I didn’t care…” Ed looked away. “I never did do a good job of that, did I?”

Winry caught his chin and made him look at her. “You did your best and we all made it through. You don’t have to hide any more. I think it was a very sweet thing to do and that’s one of the things I love about you.” Winry stunned him with a kiss then got to her feet. She left the dazed young man sitting there and greeted his brother with a ‘let me see the little one, Al.’ Winry knew a corner had been turned and everything was going to be the way she always imagined it could be.

Date: 2007-10-27 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com
I still love this but a sentence went missing in paragraph two. And you're quite welcome for the ideas. It's what we're here for, right? *grin*

Date: 2007-10-27 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hope-assassin.livejournal.com
This story rules, I quite love! I noticed the missing end of the sentence as well, but it's nothing too critical.

Very nice!

Date: 2007-10-27 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com
so
much
LOVE

waaaaiii it's sooooo sweet XDD I can deffinetely picture Ed being all sneaky and mysterious^^ great writing, keep it up!

Date: 2007-10-27 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lyricnonsense.livejournal.com
Oooo, how cute! And fluffy! Me likes.

Now, hows about that other Ed blushing fic? *wink wink nudge nudge*

Date: 2007-10-27 04:11 pm (UTC)
ext_110433: The Magdalen Reading (Editor)
From: [identity profile] nebroadwe.livejournal.com
Everyone's in an EdWin mood these days (hums happily). Love the situation (that's one docile kitten :-) and Ed's recognition that hiding his feelings has become a habit without a purpose. The end seems a little rushed, though. Breaking out the kissing sentence to be its own paragraph might help, so there's a readerly pause around what's clearly a "whoa!" moment in the action.

Date: 2007-10-27 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer1789.livejournal.com
That was just sweet! ^^ Lol, I can't be believe he snuck in a kitten either. ;)

Date: 2007-10-27 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Almost anything for his little brother!

love the icon

Date: 2007-10-27 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
confession, ending is rushed since it's deadline was today and I'm involved with the theatre all last week and next so I plum ran out of time.

Glad you liked it though

Date: 2007-10-27 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
thanks for the help and I'm glad you liked it.

Hmmm i'll have to pull a card for that other Ed fic

Date: 2007-10-27 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
thanks. I'm so glad you liked it.

Date: 2007-10-27 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
hmmm yes wondering WHERE that went? Ah Microsoft Word you are full of crack

thank you very much. I'm glad you loved it.

Date: 2007-10-27 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
yes yes and hmmm stupid word. Fixed sentence. Thanks

Date: 2007-10-27 08:09 pm (UTC)
ext_110433: The Magdalen Reading (Default)
From: [identity profile] nebroadwe.livejournal.com
Deadlines, gah. What's that line about the whooshing sound they make as they go by?

Date: 2007-10-27 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
this one would definitely whooshed by me if i hadn't rushed. I think they're deleting the whole comm once the charity drive is over so...

Date: 2007-10-27 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com
No problem. It's what I'm here for. *giggles*

Date: 2007-10-27 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
wish i knew where it went

Date: 2007-10-27 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com
It's the season, a ghaistie prolly took it.

Date: 2007-10-27 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
could be. they're like that

Date: 2007-10-28 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mulzrule.livejournal.com
Very sweet! I loved the line, "Occasionally when he started spouting alchemic formulas to hide his feelings, she felt vaguely embarrassed that she loved him." She's probably like, 'Why do I like this geek?'*laughs*

Hey Ed! Flying kittens? That's a good one. *giggles*

Date: 2007-10-28 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
Oh yes yes she is (she even says so in canon!) I know way to abuse kittens ed. glad you liked it

Date: 2007-10-28 05:40 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-10-28 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fairy-dogma.livejournal.com
More Ed/Win fluff! And what good fluff it is. Thank God, now I can keep up my unhealthy addiction to it.

Date: 2007-10-28 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mulzrule.livejournal.com
Bwahahaha for cannon! Ed's always like, WTF? I do NOT abuse animals, even when we catch him in the act. His personal hell will be full of kitties! *cackles*

Date: 2007-10-28 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annepackrat.livejournal.com
Is Al asleep during this exchange? Love the fic though. Ed / Win fluff without Dissappearing!Al syndrome is very good.

Date: 2007-10-28 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
happy to feed the addiction! Thanks!

Date: 2007-10-28 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
And Ed's hell is Al's heaven

Date: 2007-10-28 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
Since he's not talking or responding to the kitten dropping (way to catch that plot hole COM) sure, he's asleep. yeah that's it.

glad you liked it

Date: 2007-10-29 12:25 am (UTC)

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