and to round off the suck
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cornerofmadnessI had to go get my blood drawn today...fasting. Which meant no breakfast before class. I trundle down there and get that restaurant waiting list buzzer thing and sent off to wait. I prop this up right in the middle of my chest using the iron restraints of my boobs (mostly so I could simulate Logan's Run when it goes off. I'd have gone through the hallways crying it's not my time, I'm too young if I didn't think I'd end up in the PICU) Thank god I brought a book.
ONE HOUR later I get buzzed back. They can't find my records. I said but i CALLED my endocrinologist to make sure this wouldn't happen. Oh HIS office, the receptionist says in disgust. That office never has it together. More sitting and waiting while the lab calls down to get that office off its ass. Meanwhile i'm starving and since I knew i had to pee in a cup, I haven't gone all morning either. I'm thinking holy hell it's going to be like Niagra Falls in a cup. Luckily once i got back there I a) managed to dodge a student who barely passed and is know a phlebotomist, and b) got one who got me in one stick.
and a writing meme lifted from a chunk of ye ol' Flist
Pick the first line from your last twenty-five fanfics and see if you can find a pattern.
Okay one, using just June, July, August I had MORE than 25 stories. Two, the patterns. Yes I write too much angst and two much smut. Three- I overuse the word 'look'. Everyone's eyes are spinning everywhere. weak. Four - I have a penchant for writing brats
Shigure loved having his own home.
Winry didn’t know why she expected things to change with Edward once he met his goals.
Tenpou slowly roused out of a deep sleep, an unexpected but not unpleasant sensation luring him from his slumber.
Saya hated herself, hated her own weaknesses.
Dawn’s hands shook.
He had been watching for a little while.
“I can’t believe the things I do for love,” Connor grumbled, sprawled naked on the bathroom rug.
Roy felt odd as he set his belongings down in his sister’s guest room.
Goku sagged down on the blanket that made up his small section of their river side encampment.
Roy looked around his temporary housing.
Edward trembled, his mouth opening and closing but, for once, he could think of nothing to say
The wagon’s wheels moved too slowly, damn it.
Roy lounged on his chair in the coffee house, eyeing the little blonde bringing his coffee.
Fat beads of sweat covering most of his body, Ling shifted uncomfortably on the blanket laid out over the rough desert ground
Ling tried not to slump but boredom dragged his bones down to the ground
Ling sniffed around the edges of Greed’s consciousness.
As far as anyone knew, she was at Devil’s Lake with Rebecca and truthfully, Riza had started her R&R there, just to get enough pictures taken in different outfits to show off at the office when she got back
Kenren had nothing planned for the day other than lying around under a tree, drinking sake and nursing his wounded pride.
He wished they couldn’t see him.
Sometimes Goku wished he spoke his mind more often.
Everything hurt.
Jiroshin found Kanzeon in front of her gazing pool, an expression between irritated and bemused on her face.
“I’m hungry.” Goku flopped back, staring up at the fat, full moon watching down over him.
Goku knew he wasn’t supposed to just go barging into people’s private places but Konzen was locked up in his office doing all kinds of paperwork, which was so boring.
It had started out as a joke.
Tellus' little one
another one i bred
i just like this one
the last of the dragons I really wanted
I might as well get them all
these are all ELD's
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ishte (who still has more of these than me up on her posts) 
click on the tombstone, it's NOT dead yet, stupid site
and Lyra's
ONE HOUR later I get buzzed back. They can't find my records. I said but i CALLED my endocrinologist to make sure this wouldn't happen. Oh HIS office, the receptionist says in disgust. That office never has it together. More sitting and waiting while the lab calls down to get that office off its ass. Meanwhile i'm starving and since I knew i had to pee in a cup, I haven't gone all morning either. I'm thinking holy hell it's going to be like Niagra Falls in a cup. Luckily once i got back there I a) managed to dodge a student who barely passed and is know a phlebotomist, and b) got one who got me in one stick.
and a writing meme lifted from a chunk of ye ol' Flist
Pick the first line from your last twenty-five fanfics and see if you can find a pattern.
Okay one, using just June, July, August I had MORE than 25 stories. Two, the patterns. Yes I write too much angst and two much smut. Three- I overuse the word 'look'. Everyone's eyes are spinning everywhere. weak. Four - I have a penchant for writing brats
Shigure loved having his own home.
Winry didn’t know why she expected things to change with Edward once he met his goals.
Tenpou slowly roused out of a deep sleep, an unexpected but not unpleasant sensation luring him from his slumber.
Saya hated herself, hated her own weaknesses.
Dawn’s hands shook.
He had been watching for a little while.
“I can’t believe the things I do for love,” Connor grumbled, sprawled naked on the bathroom rug.
Roy felt odd as he set his belongings down in his sister’s guest room.
Goku sagged down on the blanket that made up his small section of their river side encampment.
Roy looked around his temporary housing.
Edward trembled, his mouth opening and closing but, for once, he could think of nothing to say
The wagon’s wheels moved too slowly, damn it.
Roy lounged on his chair in the coffee house, eyeing the little blonde bringing his coffee.
Fat beads of sweat covering most of his body, Ling shifted uncomfortably on the blanket laid out over the rough desert ground
Ling tried not to slump but boredom dragged his bones down to the ground
Ling sniffed around the edges of Greed’s consciousness.
As far as anyone knew, she was at Devil’s Lake with Rebecca and truthfully, Riza had started her R&R there, just to get enough pictures taken in different outfits to show off at the office when she got back
Kenren had nothing planned for the day other than lying around under a tree, drinking sake and nursing his wounded pride.
He wished they couldn’t see him.
Sometimes Goku wished he spoke his mind more often.
Everything hurt.
Jiroshin found Kanzeon in front of her gazing pool, an expression between irritated and bemused on her face.
“I’m hungry.” Goku flopped back, staring up at the fat, full moon watching down over him.
Goku knew he wasn’t supposed to just go barging into people’s private places but Konzen was locked up in his office doing all kinds of paperwork, which was so boring.
It had started out as a joke.
Tellus' little one another one i bred i just like this one the last of the dragons I really wanted I might as well get them all these are all ELD's
ishte (who still has more of these than me up on her posts) click on the tombstone, it's NOT dead yet, stupid siteand Lyra's
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Date: 2008-08-30 01:17 pm (UTC)As for the setences, it was interesting. I was surprised how many of my stories started with short sentences. I hadn't really thought about it.
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Date: 2008-08-30 02:01 pm (UTC)I had little pattern in structure. Mine was all in theme