question for my original fiction filter people

[cornerofmadness]

if i put up one or two chapters of my vampire novel, would anyone have time to read it in the next week or so? I need this polished up for class and I am trying to make changes and I honestly need to know if the opening works or not. SOme of you have already seen it.


As for my sexy times Vegas Vampires that I sent in, there has been news

I remembered one of the things i wanted to say before. The schoolbook store had a sale. I finally bought my first Rio branded shirt (after 5 years, that probably means i'll get a new job or something). they were really nice heavy sweatshirts for 15$ that i got mom one too for the holidays. sadly they're Hoodies which neither of us like all the much but hoods can be chopped off.

Comments

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Hoodies? *frowny*

I can look at it. :D

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

don't like the hoodie part

yay

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I'm not keen on hoodies. I'd rather have a hat and a scarf.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

i don't use those much either

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

You don't have chronic ear/throat infections, either.

So there.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

ears yes, throat no

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

icky

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Yeah, especially since it's cool enough I don't want to turn on the AC in the truck but still too hot to be driving around without some air from somewhere - and the air is cool enough it's bothering my ears and....

I'm so over this.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

yes i could see how that would be a problem. the weather shifted again (it's hot) and my sinuses said headache time

[evil-little-dog.livejournal.com]

Ugh.

[enemytosleep]

I ♥ hoodies.

I'm not sure I can read it if it's long, but I can try skimming? Would Saturday night be okay?

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

it might not be up til tomorrow but yes. it won't be horribly long

thanks

i find hood pointless for the most part except on my rain coat

[sillymagpie.livejournal.com]

Congrats on the vampire story!

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

thanks well hopefully thanks. it's not certain yet

[silvrethorn.livejournal.com]

I can look at your vampire novel, no problem. Just make sure I can find it. I'm not sure where you post your original fic, even though I am on your OF filter. It is uber-important that the opening of a piece works, though, so the more eyes on this one, the better.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

thanks. I'm going to repost it. Probably tonight. I need to fix up some of it. ironically i will NOT have to restore it back to 1990's since none of the updates saved...