More of that Connor/Angel story

[cornerofmadness]

Here's the actual FIRST chapter of Leaning on the Edge of E, where the chapter I wrote quickly for Maren's B-day came from. Let me know what you think. Oh and this is Connor POV (it'll be alternating Connor/Angel first person pov's). Since this is a WIP all input is very much appreciated.

 

Comments

[marenfic.livejournal.com]

He's going to make quite the entrance to the battle. Great first chapter.

I loved "my" chapter too. Angel is a big dumb goober sometimes but I like him trying to be the cool dad and loving the B/A. Plus the story has Faith so I'm in heaven.

[marenfic.livejournal.com]

Oh, but I should mention that I'm irritated with you for making me aware of crazy_girl_mary's challenge because now I'm planning on using it for leni_ba's IWRY Marathon.

:p

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

SNORT. I think I screamed at Writing Goddess for making ME aware of that challenge. Like I needed another challenge.

And worse, I STILL have a multi character PWP based on Rocky Horror's sound track begging to be written. Can I shoot that part of my brain?

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

Thanks, yes Connor is and part of the problem is (I started this driving from FL to PA) is that Connor refused to tell me chapter two. He starts today when I'm trying to teach class. SHUT UP. I have to explain glycogenesis, glucogenolysis and glycogenolysis and how they're NOT the same and scrawny is chattering away.

And I'm glad you liked your chapter too. There'll be more B/A and Faith, probably right up to the end and yes, he can be a goober at times but that's what the bulk of this story is about, him learning to be a good dad (and connor to be a better son)