Angel Ficathon
May. 30th, 2004 09:43 amPairing: Angelus/Darla (Angel/Spike is always fine too)
Genre You Prefer: I like Dark, Evil, well researched, Plot Driven, Smut is good, slash is good.
Requests: Any time before the soul, I have a carriage kink, lol.
Restrictions: No bashing of Drusilla, if you can't write her don't write her, just don't make her out to be an idiot, no babytalk, they're evil.
No problem. I do love writing historical fic though I'm not as good with Angelus as I am with Spike/Dru (as much as I adore Angelus I find him difficult to write, much more difficult than Spike for some reason). I'm pretty happy with this story. It'll probably get more polishing before it hits my website so suggestions are welcome. It IS NC-17 (evil vampires here, rape, murder and mayhem are part and parcel). It's nearly 11,000 words long (sigh)
So without further ado here's Dance With the Devil in the Pale Moonlight (extra points to those who know which movie/character I stole the title from)

Re: When History Nerds Counter-Attack
Date: 2004-06-02 10:16 am (UTC)Like I said, you asked for evil vampires so I saw no reason to pretty them up. Darla/Angelus have always been shown as violent sexually especially toward each other.
Sorry that didn't work out for you but I'll confess to being a little put out by it. I don't think you intended to come across as a little rude but given the response here and privately,it was taken that way. But I'm okay with that since it'll hardly be the first or last time someone didn't like something I've written (you should see some of the comments I've received on my professional stuff). I don't think I'll be changing much in this story, quite frankly (beyond the expurgated version that will appear on FFN) since I think it's pretty true to the characters and the time period. And since it's not your type of story, I don't think some small amounts of fiddling with it would make it to your taste so that would just be an exercise in futility. Given that in ficathons you are lucky if you get 50% of your requests done another one in the loss column isn't that much of a difference.
Sorry it didn't work out better.
Re: When History Nerds Counter-Attack
Date: 2004-06-02 03:40 pm (UTC)And you're right, a little tinkering may not make it my favorite piece ever, but I will give it another look none-the-less. I've archived your stories before and very well may want future stories to put beside them. I have stories of my own that I love and others I hate so I never give up on myself or others simply because of one story. I wish there was a magic way to make my words express what it as that my brain was thinking when I read it the first time, it just doesn't always want to cooperate.
I had a whole thing I started to say here, but I think I'm done, lol. I don't want to spam your LJ anymore with vague things that probably won't explain my vibe very well. I'm sorry.
Re: When History Nerds Counter-Attack
Date: 2004-06-02 04:03 pm (UTC)I'm okay with you not liking the story, really. There are things we read by our favorite authors out there and we sit and wonder what was that? And yeah, guess that's all that really needs to be said.